I apologise for the mistake I made. The writing course I took part in was Arvon, and not Avron. Thanks for notifying me about the mistake. and reading. (:
P.S. To wtf: Are you still interested in being a proofreader? I need a critic who would point out my mixed metaphors and comment on whether the emotions are adequately expressed, as well as...well critique it like a lit. essay.
Must go to litup soon to check whether Mr Chris has any comments, even if I made very minor edits to the piece before. I wonder if CAP accepts the piece on incest? I liked that the most, but Jing Yi said that it wouldn't get in because a mentor who was a gay activist got fired (or something like that).
Well it doesn't really cross the OB markers. All they said was no sex, no racism and no politics, they didn't say anything about no homosexuality or incest/bro-sis relationship(s).
I found the 'brain drain' phenomenon pretty ironic. Singapore chases away local talent with its OB markers and censorship while they are trying to boot lick foreign talent into joining Singapore's community.
